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#1 A. Renée Mercer

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Posted 24 October 2010 - 02:41 AM

Mercer Manor
June 13th, 1794

It was the early, noisy chatter of the marsh warblers that roused creatures of the South Downs upon Sussex, and their squeaking and griping could be heard through the smallest of cracks in a double-paned window that was often let open to let in the sea breezes into a handsomely decorated room. The walls were of heavy grey stone, and a thick plush carpet of red and gold protected its sometimes barefooted inhabitants from the deep cold air that seemed to emanate from the very floors.  No fancily gilded paintings adorned the walls, plain except for long stretches of painstakingly embroidered tapestries that hung from one wall to another, the beautiful calligraphy of some strange, albeit beautiful foreign language stitched boldly in gold thread. A large four poster bed was wedged into one corner, but its silk drapes had already been thrust aside, and the fine linen sheets were knotted, as if someone had hastily pushed them off only moments ago – the recentness which was shown by the small embedment still imprinted upon the swan feather down mattress. Sitting curled up as small as was humanly possible upon the narrow windowsill, her gangly things pressed against her flat chest, was Renée, her dark azure eyes wide with undisguised wonder as she silently watched the sun rise beyond the white cliffs, to the East of the English channel. She pushed the window open farther and closed her eyes briefly with a contented sigh as the cool wind caressed her rosy cheeks, still hot from the tempting warmth of her bed. Grudgingly she glanced back at the bed but shrugged her shoulders – oh, she knew she should get in as much sleep as she can, it was only six thirty in the morning, but who with half a heart could possibly sleep on such a day as this!

Today her father would return from King’s Cross Station in London with her two elder sisters, Desirée and Adele, and true though it was that she despised and distrusted them heartily as they had been nothing but cruel to her these past ten years, nearly eleven, she corrected herself, they would be fresh from their latest year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and that was the news Renée desired more than anything else at the moment. Life here at the manor for the past five months had been so dull, and if she were to be truthful her days had turned from mediocre to awful ever since the newest and most wanted addition to the Mercer family had been born – Edouard, her mother’s only surviving boy out of eight children, one other boy born dead, and her father’s sole legitimate heir to his land and titles. Privately Renée thought it monstrously unfair that only a boy could inherit, for nothing in her limited experience with the opposite sex had proved to her that they were any more capable of running a business or clan than she or any other woman could. Indeed, her small interaction had shown to opposite instead – she thought most of them, excepting her father of course, to be very uncouth and far less interesting than herself. It wasn’t a secret or a surprise to her, at any rate, that her mother Margaux headed most of the family’s domestic affairs for her father; she could only assume from this that because men were too stupid to do any real work, they made their women do it for them.
Clever in a malicious sort of way though, to be fair.

She thought of her mother with a wistful sort of sadness, for although they were very close, these past months caring for the needy, stupid little white-faced, ugly brat of a thing had taken quite the toll on her health, and for days and days Renée had been strictly forbidden from communicating with her mother on her father’s orders, who said that Renée’s whining would worry and upset her. This separation, which was really her father’s fault, only made her hate the innocent little boy more, and for a few seconds she poisonously wished under her breath that he had never been born. Then she quickly recanted for her Margaux’s sake and blushed with shame – What would Mother say if she heard me say so?
The soft peeping of the brown house sparrows joined into the warbler’s harsher melody to form a chorus, and a tiny close lipped smile formed on her face before she took in a deep breath and began to sing, softly at first, and then louder, and the winds carried her fine tuned soprano far off into the wet downs.
“Greensleeves was all my joy,
Greensleeves was my delight!
Greensleeves was my heart of gold,
And who but my Lady Greensleeves? “

The heavy oak wood door to her chambers creaked open, but she paid no attention and continued to sing as a particularly raggedy looking house elf slipped inside, a young but scrawny female with long stringy hair that fell to the base of her pole like neck.
“I have been ready at your hand,
To grant whatever you would crave,
I have both wagered life and land,
Your love and good-will for to have.”
Such a lovely song with such pretty words, such inconstant ones. For if what they say is true and that muggle Tudor King truly wrote this for his Boleyn mistress, it is all a lie…for if he loved her with such sincerity how could he chop off her head, just like that?
The house elf began to stoke the seemingly dead coals into life again with magics of the simplest kind, and as the fire blazed and crackled anew in the hearth, Renée turned and acknowledged its presence with a small grin.
“Good morning, Pax. After you’re done with that and lighting the candelabra you will iron out that new caftan my Aunt Fatma ordered for me from Tangiers, won’t you? I took it out when it came last night and tried to put it on myself and rumpled it all up so now it’s such a mess I don’t know what to do.”

“Y-yes, young Miss! Would you want Pax to bring you your breakfast now, or later with young misses’ sisters when they awake to have in the dining room?”
…And be forced to endure yet another bothersome morning with Angelique asking me ‘why?’ to everything I answer for her? I’d sooner dance the volta with the devil himself.
Renée picked at imaginary stray threads on her cream colored nightgown and cast her eyes down to hide her irritation.
“Actually I’d prefer to break my fast here in my room as soon as you’re finished here, Pax.”
“Yes, and a letter came for you with the morning post, young Miss!”
Her first instinct was to raise her eyebrows in surprise – who would write to her so late at night to make the morning post ? – but she managed to control that instinctive urge and gave an elegant, dismissive shrug of her shoulders.
“If it’s not from Mother or any of my aunties I don’t wish to bother myself with it now. Put it on the mantel and then go and fetch my breakfast. I’ll read it later…maybe.”

Renée watched with some envy as Pax gave a little bow and then disapparated with a pop; she wished she could melt away into thin air and reappear again like that – but no, she still had to wait for a terrible eternity of three long months before she would learn anything useful about controlling her magic. A bit bored now that the birds had flown off, her gaze fell on the letter sitting quite innocently above the mantel, and when she saw the wax seal of the House of Lafayette situated in Calais, France, this time her eyebrows really did shoot up with shock. Quick as a water-snake in the reeds, she rushed to it and ripped through the seal, her eyes reading as quickly as her poor literacy in French would allow. The writing was cramped and small, barely legible, and this was how she read it –
“A mon ami, Rori , Je n'espère pas que vous souvenez moi, mais mon nom est François Armand Lafayette et je vous ai rencontré pour la première fois quelques ans il y a à mon cinquième fête d'anniversaire a l'manoir de Mon Oncle à Cornouailles, Angleterre. Bientôt je suis dans Calais avec mon Père, ma Mère, et ma petite soeur. Depuis je vous ai vu plusieurs fois et j'espère que vous me souvenez moi, surtout puisque nous assisterons l'Académie de Hogwarts cette année. Je me souviens que vous avez deux plus vieilles soeurs qui sont dans Slytherin, et j'ai aussi trois plus vieux frères dans Slytherin. Cyrille est de bons amis avec Desiree. Je suis désolé.. J'espère que vous vouliez être dans Slytherin, comme je fais, mais indépendamment de Maison que nous sommes mis dans j'espère que nous resterons amis. Votre vrai et fidèle ami, Armand.”

How could I not remember him? He was the only boy my own age at all the adult parties who actually paid any attention to me – and he wasn’t afraid to talk to me and joke and act normally as if I were not some monster with contagious germs instead of just a girl. I already knew his brother Cyrille is ‘friends’ with Desi…she batted her eyes at him like a drunk cow ever since Christmastide last. Anyone with the sense the gods gave a cat could see that. His French is as bad as mine – if it were any better I wouldn’t have been able to read it at all.
With a secretive smile, Renée pressed the parchment against her chest and locked it away in her cupboard with a silver key that hung upon a slender chain around her neck, and decided she would not reply. If he had been anyone really important, of course she would have written back immediately, but although Armand was kind, he was only a fourth son and practically a nobody compared to her. And by the sound of his devotion, she was sure he would forgive her by the time they met once again at King’s Cross come the fast approaching September.

An hour later, Renée, fully dressed in the gorgeous caftan her favorite Auntie had sent to her from Morocco, admired her reflection in the mirror as vain as a peacock. Her long gold brown hair was set in pretty waves that fell to the small of her back, and the turquoise and pearl earrings that dangled from her ears perfectly matched the oceanic blue sash of the traditional Moroccan gown and sapphire, dragon leather slippers. She was not allowed to wear makeup and such a young age, but as she smiled coyly at herself in the looking glass she thought she made a pretty enough picture without the Egyptian kohl and eyeliner her sisters so adored to abuse. A knock on her door startled her briefly from her vanity, but she cleared her throat to signal that Pax could enter.

A frown puckered between her eyebrows when she saw that the nervous looking house elf did not carry a silver platter topped with hot tea and biscuits like she expected and which her aching stomach looked forward to.
“Yes?”
She snapped a bit rudely with a roll of her eyes.
“Pax is sorry to not have your breakfast here now, but it is downstairs instead with the Lord Mercer and your sisters…and also Pax is supposed to let young Miss know that there is a guest waiting for her in the foyer before she goes to eat. I is sorry!”
But who could it be? How annoying, and so early too! This had better be someone important.
“…Fine. Tell Father and my guest that I will be right down, Pax.”
“Y-yes, young Miss.”
In less than five minutes, Renée had bid her father good morning and completely ignored her younger siblings, who reminded her of the quarrelsome birds outside with all of their unnecessary noisiness, and then proceeded to the foyer at the opposite wing of the manor by the main entrance, escorted by Pax – as if she had not, in fact, lived here for years. The two mahogany doors swung inward, and she forced herself to slow her pace and greet the guest, whoever they were, with a polite smile…

Edited by A. Renée Mercer, 25 October 2010 - 07:54 AM.


#2 James Mallory

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 04:20 PM

Orion fidgeted nervously as he waited for... She was called Renee wasn't she? He should have guessed that his father had some ulterior motive when he had suggested this trip. True enough he was always anxious for his son to learn the details of the family business, but rarely was he taken to meet business partners. Let alone their daughters.

He had at least met Renee before, a couple of times to be exact. If you were a rich pureblood you could hardly avoid meeting other rich purebloods. But he didn't know her, he couldn't remember having a conversation with her and he felt darned awkward standing alone waiting for her like this. It made the whole thing feel like a rather bigger deal than just being properly introduced to somebody you would be going to school with next september. And he knew why, his father - his calculating, aspiring father- who would stop at nothing to marry his son off to a suitable girl at the earliest opportunity. And who would be more suitable than a rich pureblood from a family with international business connections?

If there was one consolation, it was that Orion's father firmly disaproved of romance, love affairs and any other relationship that his son might wish to take beyond mere friendship. This was frankly just as well, because although Orion was perfectly comfortable around ship's captains and factory owners he wasn't so good at talking to people his own age and could as well ask a girl out as fly to the moon.

The wait seemed interminable, how big was this ridiculous house? And what secrets might it hold. He couldn't even here the two men any more, they had gone somewhere to discuss business. Finally though, he heard footsteps and hastily composed himself into a model of social grace and good manners.



#3 A. Renée Mercer

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Posted 02 November 2010 - 04:30 PM

Just as she had been about to enter, Renée felt the heavy hand of one who could only be her father grip her slim shoulders and effortlessly twist her around to face him. Immediately, she sank into a low curtsy, her dark blue eyes gazing downward before she rose up after a few seconds, and waited for him to speak. His own eyes, the color of a cloudless spring sky and so much like her own, bored into her own with a feeling she was sure was akin to dislike and something more, but as always she refused to let it faze her, and her face was carefully arranged into a mask of courtesy and daughterly subsequience.
“Daughter,”
He acknowledged in his gruff voice without the tiniest lilt of an accent to give his French ancestry away.
“I have invited a Mister Septimus Baines to our home today to discuss some business, and he brought along his eldest son Orion so that the two of you could meet before you attend Hogwarts this year. I trust that you remember him.”

Indeed she did remember the quiet, mature and seemingly polite young boy from the various balls and other pureblood soirees over the years that the Baines family had been invited to – merely because of their money, which was rumored to have been a rather recent acquisition to to the family’s business dealings with muggles and other such trash. Of course Renée knew the Baines fortune was nothing when compared to her own, or her Father’s, more accurately, but still – as Lionel Mercer had no doubt recognized with his intrinsic astuteness, they were an up and coming family in English pureblood society and it wouldn’t hurt their influence none to be assosciated with them now and especially in the years to come, for who knew what the future might bring, and how far they might rise together? It was not what her father told her, but it was exactly what he did not say which was the most important piece to keep close to mind – that it was all very well to exchange money and contracts with the man, but on a more personal and far more political note, it would be better by far to have some sort of personal tie to the family – and there was nothing that Renée understood better than politics, the great game her parents thrust her, her sisters, and her little brother into as soon as they had drawn their first breaths.

“Bien sur, papá. Je comprends parfaitement.”
“Good. Is that the caftan from Fatma you’re wearing now?”
He did notice! After all, it is very fine.
She disguised her pleasure with another slight curtsy and murmured something along the lines of, ‘Yes my Lady Aunt sent it to me just this morning.’
“I thought so. It is fine to wear in the house, but when you go out in London with your sisters and escort you should wear a proper gown. You’re in England now and of noble English blood. You would do well to remember it and not flaunt your mother’s heritage whilst you are here.”
Her former happiness immediately transformed into a hot rage at his careless slight to her mother and her favorite Aunt, but she bit her tongue and smiled blandly up at him, her perfect pearls of straight white teeth showing in a beautiful, albeit completely fake expression.
“As you say.”  

How could he discuss my Mother in such a manner! As if her Berber ancestry, which is just as if not more proud than his own, means nothing compared to his! And the caftan isn’t so different from the French and English gowns Desi and Adele wear all the time…just a little bit different.
Lionel gave his third and the least of his favorite children a sharp look to let her know that despite her more than adequate performance he was not the least bit fooled, and without another word he strode into the foyer and greeted the Baines fellow with a dip of his head and a respectful thank you for accepting his invitation. Renée stood silently behind him, her face emotionless and composed, her movements practiced and curtsies machinated as formal introductions were given, but her eyes were downcast to hide her irritation as she was still smarting over her father’s tactless remark. Every now and then she peeked up to glance at Septimus – who, she noticed, for all of his fine clothes and correct wording did not carry himself as her father did. The two men began to discuss droll business topics, and now thoroughly bored with the whole thing and with her stomach growling louder than ever, she turned her gaze towards the boy and raked in the minute differences. Although as young as she, Orion carried himself with more of a noble presence than his own Father.

She remembered that at every party they had both attended he was quiet, avoided the other children, and gravitated towards the adults as much as he could. Such behavior back then had puzzled her, but as she was a bit older and far more mature being nearly eleven years old and quite the young lady, she could appreciate it even though she still did not fully understand his reluctance to accept his place as a child and not a man. He certainly dressed the part of the affluent young wizard, and his pale face was a bland reflection of her own. The two were finally left alone as their fathers left  to talk more in private, and Renée nearly sighed with relief that a house elf wasn’t left behind to supervise them. They were seen as children in the eyes of the adults after all, and what trouble could they possibly get into on their own?  Bold without her father’s menacing presence watching her every move and quick to point out her lack of proper respect, she approached the boy first and lightly inclined her head in his direction, an arrogant move.
“You are called Orion? I am Aurora Renée Mercer, a pleasure to meet you I’m sure,”
She said in a casual tone, her eyes searching his with thinly veiled curiosity. Now that the adults were gone surely he would be more forthcoming? Or perhaps he hadn’t changed at all – only time would tell.

[I may edit this a bit, I have work in an hour so I apologize if it isn't very good. Nice post you did though. (:]

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 01:40 PM

((Sorry for not replying sooner - i was away for a few days with not much time or internet))

Orion took Renee in with one glance. Like himself she did not seem best pleased at finding herself in this particular situation. Quite possibly she was even less happy than he at this habit of forced introductions which had little to do with genuine friendship. Even setting that aside there was something different about her, something to set her apart from the norm. Her skin, her dress, her voice - she was just different. and perhgaps her father wanted her to fit in in much them same way his father demanded it of him. Except perhpas he had taken to the idea rather more kindly.

Pushing his curiousity into a corner of his mind where it could be given later reconsideration, Orion advanced towards the girl and bowed politely, manners impeccable as always. "I am, it is a pleasure to meet you". He held out his hand courteously "or rather to make your acquaintance properly because I believe we have met before".

She seemed more relaxed already, as though the two men leaving had removed a weight from her shoulders. He felt much the same - having accepted his destiny he felt it was rather mean of it to keep pursuing him and wrapping itself around him like an oversize cloak.

He smiled non-commitally at her and allowed his eye to dwell over her for a longer moment. "That's a very pretty gown. Unusual too, but it looks very well on you".






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